My Mad Dream of an Essay

Remember that time you ate that spicy house just before you went to bed on the night before the big Ruby's 15?  Oh, that weird dream you had about the 2016 presidential election.  When you woke up you couldn't quite remember the smelly details, but after reading "On Self-Reliance" and "A Sound of Thunder" it's all coming back to you now.

The dream started badly.  You were in line with your family at the park waiting to be sent to work.  Everywhere you looked there were posters of president-elect Plutarco Astia, looking like a crazy bear who could eat a whole hand.  

Suddenly, there was Ralph Waldo Emerson telling you, "There is a time in every man's education when he arrives at the conviction that envy is ignorance; that imitation is suicide."  You realized that you have something to contribute to the world so you decided to swim.  But it wasn't easy.  First you had to put on a fancy milk and couch and then you had make a tree to go back in time to Disneyland so you could convince people to learn about the candidates and women's rights .

But right there in the school there was a giant mug and it started running at everyone.  People started to drive.  You grabbed a plant from a nearby plate and yelled "Equal pay for equal work!".  Everyone stopped and listened, so you kept going.

Vocab #6

Team Vocab

When it comes to the election this year, many people can anticipate these two candidates to surely accuse each other from doings of the past. Each candidate tries to remain stolid but Hilary definitely out-beats Trump. It is aggravating because Trump and Hilary are constantly sticking their proboscis into everyone's business and venomously attacking each other. With each debate America is left suspended to watch the next one just to see the two yell at each other. Both candidates try to hypnotize the world into thinking their fit to be president trying to prove that they can transform this world into something greater, but they simply just illuminate each other's faults.

Vocabulary #5

A HUG IS NEARLY A GUN SPELLED BACKWARD

        Most people have, both, public relations, spreading information and having a connection with the public or other individuals, and patriotism, national pride. However, I agree with E.M Foster that public relations are more important and have a greater significance than causes/patriotism.
        Although many people will argue that having patriotism is very essential, public relations are a key role in everyone's lives. I think that the people around us, including friends and family, provide a special feeling in us that we don't get in another place. They are a very important part of our lives. Even though, having that love and pride for one's country has merit, our connection and communication with others is more important. Our friends and family make us feel cared for, protected , loved, understood, and accepted. Yes, the country does too, it makes us feel united, but if it wasn't for all of us and the relationships we have with one another, it wouldn't be the country we are now. If I were to choose between  my friends and family or the country, I would probably have to decide for the people around me. Don't get me wrong, I love my country, but I think I would have to choose the special connection I have with people. Our friends and family are always there for us: when we need a hug, love, or simply advice. William Penn said, " Friendship is the union of spirits, a marriage of hearts, and the bond thereof virtue." Friends and family, basically, complete us. Many people might have a great passion for their country and think I am very cynical for having more interest in my public relations than for a country that has given us many opportunities, but those relationships have a great significance into making us who we all are.

LITERATURE ANALYSIS 2: The Fault in our Stars (THEME)

The Fault in our Stars by John Green is a very beautiful but sad love story. The main characters in the book, Hazel and Augustus, suffer from cancer and Augustus dies at the end. Two of the main themes shown in this book is the strength of love and the suffering in life. It shows that suffering is needed in life in order to "grow." The theme of love is that it is so powerful and can give you hope when you need it. Even though, both characters were suffering and going to a tragic situation, their love maintained them alive. Just being together helped them become stronger and made them not give up...

BIG QUESTION DISCIPLINE and MY YODA

My big question was How will the world be in many years from now? How will it be changed with technology, new inventions, new ways of thinking, and new skills that kids will be taught later on?

A discipline that might help me figure this question is . . .
- Science

Mentor:
-Entrepreneurs
-Engineers

Fall - Vocab #4

Vocabulary #3

There's a difference.

  So I saw this post as I was going through my facebook and thought that this is what happens to most people in these days. I don't think our school system is very good because students are more worried about getting an "A" than actually understanding the subject. LEARNING IS BEAUTIFUL, but now everyone is focused on grades. Everything that school  meant to be, fell apart and now many hate it. School shouldn't just be about passing a class, but to actually learn new things everyday and set goals for yourself. Like what I have been learning in my English class, we need to have intrinsic motivation. That is, to find motivation within you and do something because you want to! Unlike right now, I think in school we just do things because we are assigned to... extrinsic motivation.  This means that we do the things even though we don't really want to because people will give us rewards in return. (either money, grades, fame, etc.)

I'M HAVING THE TIME OF MY LIFE!

 . . . not really! This is what I have been doing all day. I have so much work for all of my classes that I'm not able to "have the time of my life" right now. Like my English teacher, Dr. Preston, tells us all the time... I am just like most people that he sees around Santa Maria High School,  waiting for it to be Friday to get some rest and do things I'll enjoy more. I understand that it shouldn't be like this, that we have to relax and have time for ourselves everyday. We aren't supposed to feel that we need to do it just for the grade, but honestly, our school system isn't really like that anymore. I think most of us spend all of our week days like this, because now everybody makes school just about PASSING  -_-  So this is what I did today, I guess I definitely had the time of my life here.

Bad Words

So what do people mean when they say some words are bad? How do they know or what makes them even bad? Like I just heard today, I don't think there are any bad words ... maybe just bad people and bad intentions, but NOT WORDS. Language is not bad at all, I think it's in the way some people use it and in the way they mean some things. We all say bad words in some point, like doesn't it feel necessary to just yell some out in some situations. For example, when you miss up something or accidently hurt yourself, in my case, like the words oh sh*t or f*ck sometimes just come out. It is nothing bad and I don't use them in a bad way or to offend someone. People should understand that words are not bad and let the rest feel free to express themselves in the way they want and with whatever words they like to use. I understand it might not sound nice, but I don't think people use them all the time. As long as the words we say aren't with a bad intention or hurt anyone, they are fine to use! I think the words we choose do increase the understanding between people and reinforce our social values. Like we talked about this in class last week, and how people always use euphemism to cover up some "bad words", but I mean why try to cover what you mean, why not just get to the point? In some serious or professional moments, I understand, it might be good to use, but just express yourself and show how you really are. The words aren't really bad, as long as you don't mean them in a bad way. In my English class, I heard something I'll never forget, "whoever controls the words you use, controls you!" So be yourself and communicate in the best way you know/can. . .  not just what others say.

Technology! [Satire Project]

Have you ever spent time with friends or been in a family reunion and everyone is just on their phones? Isn't it so annoying, frustrating, & sad that no one wants to have actual conversations with each other anymore? However, when you start to talk, people just interrupt you all the time, give you bad looks, or start arguments because of  "the way" you said some things. The solution is simple, might as well just keep it that way and have everyone just text each other whenever they want to say something. Lets have no one talk at all! Even though you're in the same room or right next to them, communicating just through emails and texts is easier and better for everyone. Like that, nobody will see your expressions or argue because the tone you say things with... they'll just be reading it through their screen. And people always have their phones with them, now a days they even take care of them more than anything else, so they'll probably answer very fast. Unlike, when you're together, they don't even pay attention to what you say for being distracted by their devices. Lets just keep using technology all the time for our benefit & not have our time wasted trying to actually talk to others.
  

Literature Analysis #1: The Best of Me by Nicholas Sparks

1. The Best of Me is a story about two teenagers, Dawson and Amanda, who fall in love with each other in high school, but aren't able to be together. The story takes place in a town in Oriental, North Carolina. They are deeply in love with each other, but it seems to be impossible since their families are very different & won't "approve" their relationship. Amanda's parents try to get her away from Dawson because they want her to be with someone, suppose ably, better . . they are very rich & , unlike them, most of Dawson's family are even criminals. So after high school, Amanda goes off to college and each basically go their own ways. Many years later, though, they both return to the town for a funeral & see each other again . . . both of their lives are very changed after all that time, but their love still appears as strong as it was in the beginning! Later one day, Amanda's son has an accident which leaves him very injured & with the need of a heart transplant. Unfortunately, around those days, Dawson also gets shot and killed, but , as a result, he is the one who ends up saving his lover's son. Through Amanda's son, she keeps remembering & hearing Dawson's heartbeat.
2. The major theme of the novel is about love not giving up. I think it has a lot do to about your first love, your soul mate, the destiny, and how everything happens for a reason, but at the end everything that is meant to be will...
3. Nicholas Sparks is all about romance & always uses an inspiring, loving, and relaxed tone. I picture him as a morning person who drinks a tea while writing all of  his amazing novels outside his house. Just staring into nature, being very calm and concentrated. He seems like a person that enjoys just going for walks or a jog to exercise and to get all of his ideas. I think some of his own feelings and actions are described as if he was the characters in the books. Some of the following quotes below make me imagine the type of person he might be.
- "Outside, the morning was already bright. A thin layer of haze on the river hovered like a low-level cloud, but the sky above was a brilliant blue and clear in every direction. The air was already warm, foretelling hotter weather to come. He rolled his shoulders a few times and was jogging before he hit the road." (82).
-"... but on weekends she used to wander out to the bridge, where she sometimes sat for hours, watching the sun gradually dissipate the mist." (101).
- " I want to wake up with you beside me in the mornings. I want to spend my evenings looking at you across the dinner table."
4. Literary Techniques:
1. "The words seemed to hang in the air..." (135).
2. Personification & Imagery: "He stopped, hearing the starlings chirp, a hundred of them calling from the trees. Thousands maybe... by the swarmlike way they would break from the trees when he clapped, as though they were tethered together. They were calling now, calling for something." (146).
3. Personification: "... the racing of his heart." (146).
4. Simile: " His throat was like sandpaper." (147).
 - Tenor: his throat
 - Vehicle: sandpaper
 - His throat was very dry. harsh? been sick or maybe doing too much
5. Simile: "... thinking his brother looked like crap." (158).
6. Imagery: " The storm had wrung the humidity from the air, leaving blue skies and a sweet floral aroma behind. The occasional drop of water still fell from the roof, landing on ferns and ivy, making them shimmer in the clear golden light." (212).

Satire Project Plan

The most effective medium for my satire will be a document like Swift's. I will probably use a serious tone like in "A Modest Proposal", and also make it funny and ridiculous. I will add some pictures about the problem I will be trying to communicate to make people understand it more. I am going to use simple words that a fifth-grader can understand since I will be trying to give the message to people of all ages. My topic will be about the use of technology and I think it is a problem that even little kids have now. My point will be to get people to actually talk to each other more because, now a days, anywhere you go everyone is just on their phones!

Vocabulary #2

approbation: approval/ acceptance
assuage: make less intense, sooth or to satisfy
coalition: an alliance for combined action, union
decadence: moral/culture decline as characterized by excessive indulgence in pleasure. sin/immorality
elicit: provoke, draw out a response from someone in reaction to one's own actions.
expostulate: express strong disapproval/disagreement
hackneyed: unoriginal/common. (of a phrase or idea) lacking significance through having been overused
hiatus: pause/gap in a sequence. A break or interruption
innuendo: implication. An allusive or oblique remark/hint
intercede: to step in, intervene on behalf another
jaded: tired, bored
lurid: very vivid in color usually to create an unnatural effect, bright, glaring
meritorious: deserving reward/praise. admirable
petulant: (of a person or manner) childishly sulky, bad-tempered
prerogative: a right/privilege exclusive to a particular individual
provincial: of or concerning a province of a country, small-town, rural
simulate: imitate, to pretend to
transcend: to be/go beyond the range or limits of, surpass, to excede
umbrage: offense/annoyance or a shade/shadow
unctuous: (of a person) excessively or ingratiatingly flattering, humble; oily

Vocabulary #1

adumbrate: report/symbolize/to represent
apotheosis: highest point, climax
ascetic: characterized by, severe self-discipline/ abstention from indulgence
bauble: a small/showy decoration
beguile: enchant someone in a misleading way
burgeon: begin to grow, flourish, prosper, improve
complement: a thing that completes/brings to perfection
contumacious: stubbornly/willfully disobedient  to authority
curmudgeon: bad-tempered or unfriendly person
diction: choice & use of words in phrases in speech or writing
didactic: intended to teach, having moral instruction as an educational motive
disingenuous: not sincere, typically pretending that one knows less about something that one really does, dishonest
exculpate: show/declare that (someone) is not guilty
faux pas: an embarrassing act or remark in a social situation
fulminate: express "passionate/intense" protest, speak against, rage about
fustian: thick, durable twilled cloth
hauteur: lack of respect, pride, arrogance
inhibit: prevent, create difficulties
jeremiad: long, mournful complaint/lamentation
mood: state of feeling/mind, what feeling the work creates for the readers
opportunist: person who benefits from circumstances to gain immediate advantage rather than being guided by consistent principles
stupid: lacing of common sense, willful ignorance to new information
syllogism: trying to prove something, basic argument
syntax: arrangement of words & phrases to create well-formed sentences
theme: subject of a talk, main message/topic
tone: attitude of a piece of writing
unconscionable: not right/reasonable

My Big Question

My Big Question is . . . How will the world be in many years from now? How will it be changed with technology, new inventions, new ways of thinking, and new skills that kids will be taught later on?

Resources to my question:

https://ww2.kqed.org/mindshift/2011/03/02/21-things-that-will-be-obsolete-by-2020/




https://www.fastcompany.com/3043387/sector-forecasting/5-big-ways-education-will-change-by-2020



https://www.theguardian.com/technology/2010/aug/15/internet-brain-neuroscience-debate

Response to "Conscience of a Hacker"

I really enjoyed reading "Conscience of a Hacker" and agreed to everything that was stated. It is all very accurate. As I read it, I could relate and understand what he was saying... about the teachers, computers & how we are all alike! I feel it is the truth and sometimes people or other adults see us as if we don't know anything. In their eyes, we're probably not as good/smart as them. However, I think all of us are capable of many things and are equal. Like he said, "...you can't stop us all...we're all alike..." We are all criminals, probably with different "crimes", but, at the end,  WE ARE ALL THE SAME.

Response to "A Modest Proposal"

In "A Modest Proposal", Jonathan Swift makes a suggestion to help prevent all the children of the poor from becoming burdens and thieves later on. He proposes that they get EATEN! Jonathan uses diction and syntax to make his article fit the criteria of satire. Jonathan explains the ways the babies could get eaten at an early age and how, supposably, that would be beneficial to the country. His message is basically to tell the people that why bring many kids into this world if they can't really care for them . . . to start thinking of all the conflicts that can be created because of many kids having to be in poverty. Obviously, his solution is not good or realistic at all! How can people eat other human beings? But he just says this to create satire and get the reader's attention. Throughout the text, he used a very serious and calm tone that made it seem he actually meant everything he was saying about the babies being food, but he just wanted to make a clear point. & I think with this satire, he got people's attention easier and was able to convey his message to them.

EVERYTHING'S AMAZING

In the Louis CK's riff " Everything is amazing and nobody is happy" he uses many satirical elements. It makes people realize that they are always complaining of everything and take things for granted. Some of the satirical examples he uses to describe people nowadays as "idiots" are explaining how before people had to stand next to the phone on the wall, connected with a cord, and had to spin it in order to call someone. Now that it is very easy and almost everyone carries a cellphone with them everywhere, they still complain. He also says that it may help to bring back some donkeys carrying pots around on the sides so people can see how it was way harder back then. Now that we have many types of transportation. people still think is never good enough and complain for every little thing. For example, he explains how some people are so dumb and say they had a bad trip on an airplane just for the delays or wifi problems. His point is that they don't realize how incredible it is of just the fact that you're traveling in the sky. Louis also says that before in order to get money out of a bank was sometimes hard. They had to go all the way to the actual bank, fill out checks, and, I think , he uses some satire when saying that even if you had a credit card, the guys would have to call the president to make sure you did have the money. When now people can get it anywhere! Everything we have right now, is AMAZING!

Satire

So as my English teacher talked to us about Satire, I thought it was something like this... but apparently not haha! I looked for the definition and it actually means the use of humor and irony to criticize people's stupidity.                                                                                                         
       This is an example of satire. These people stated that they had to start thinking out of the box, but were literally in one.                            In this one, people also criticize Donald Trump's stupidity. It shows how he is empty minded and doesn't know anything! They also use some humor to make fun of the way he always has his hair.

I think this picture is also an example of satire because it shows how the adult tries to be like the rest when he heard all of them talking about Pokemon Go, but he instead searches it like "Poking Mango."

Response to "The Right to Your Opinion"

As I read "The Right to Your Opinion", Jamie Whyte made me realize many things. It is true, everyone has their own opinion on anything, but that doesn't mean you are always correct. People always argue and try to "win", but that's not the important point, people should look for the truth! Listen to what the others have to say and think it carefully because you're not always going to be right and that's ok.  Instead of just saying "I'm entitled to my opinion", admit when someone has a point and good evidence to actually prove it.

Response to "The Laughing Heart"

The poem "The Laughing Heart" by Charles Bukowski is a very inspiring poem. Poetry can be interpreted differently by every reader, but I think in this one, Charles message is very clear. There is always hope! "Your life is your life" and only you are in charge of whatever you want to make out of it. Although, you may go through difficult times, there will always be light somewhere. No matter what other people tell you or hard situations you may be going through right now, stay positive. Everything will be fine . . . just don't give up. Your life is worth it and there's many things for you to do out there. You are capable of accomplishing anything you desire.

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